1. This is the first time I've ever posted anything I've written. The format changes as I upload it which is annoying but I think you get the idea. Thanks for reading.

  2. "He began to cry, a snake withering between her thighs." Are you sure this isn't a death metal song, brother? This is pretty sick. There is always a little beauty in the eyes of Death. My only complaint is I wish it were longer. Look forward to reading more.

  3. Like where you are going but I feel the last stanza is a little forced and strays away from the rest. Definitely dig your style though man 🀘

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